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Sooooo repetitive! My lord husband, my bear, baby…ughhh. The writing is also juvenile. The FMC sounds like a child.

It’s boring. Can’t tell if it’s due to the narrator or the story. Probably both.

MMC is supposedly so powerful and scary yet acts like a little kid. Makes big plans and says/do things without thinking. #turnoff 🤮

Where’s the storyline? Need more substance and character depth.

“I can handle a lot.”

Girl, be honest, you can’t. MMC literally funded your whole life and you acted like a brat after he bailed you out of jail. Now acting all tough. Ugh.

It’s so slow and dragging. I have to take a break from it for a couple days.

Loved every minute of it! The detail, the story building, everything! Anxiously waiting to see how Helena and Caine’s love story unfolds. My guess is she blocked her memories to protect the bad side from finding out that Caine was their inside man. She’s endured so much. 🥺

The moment they finally slept together felt underwhelming. They had so much pent up chemistry, but the sex turned out so bland.

It’s slow pacing but wow. I’m invested in every scene.

Poor girl has been suffering for 800 years 🥺 the author does a good job at writing such an evil mother.

FMC is dumb and naive for someone almost 30 years old. She sleeps with him two times and is suddenly crazy about him and labels them as a couple. He tells her he’s a dangerous man and he’s protecting her by keeping her in the shadows yet the first thing she does after that discussion was go to his very public birthday party. Come on…..🤦🏻‍♀️

The twists could be seen from a hundred miles away. FMC so focused on d*ck that she never saw anything coming.

This is giving “we have Fourth Wing at home.”
UNORIGINAL with SUPER predictable plot and an ANNOYING FMC.