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GAVINNNNNNNNN!!!!!! UGHHH WHY HENRY WHY?!?! You ARE just a little boy who thinks he knows everything, just like what Gavin said. My heart is broken…I don’t want to finish it.

Before I forget…
These people speak like they’re from the modern timeline, yet there’s kings and queens and kingdoms, etc. The author needs to be consistent with what period she wants her story in.

All these characters keep asking dumb questions like they are not operatives who have been trained their whole life.

FMC is so freaking naive and dumb. Supposedly so smart and observant, yet can’t even use her brain to deduce who is lying and who she can trust. 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

What is this crazy, stupid truth revelation chapter??? The writing and pace is too stupid.

The writing is so childish.

Quite a bit of grammatical errors and writing inconsistency. Some thoughts are italicized while others are not.

Bruh who the heck think it’s a good to confess to someone after they just lost a family member? 🤦🏻‍♀️

Very boring so far….🙃

What a weak MMC…
His people do not respect and treat FMC well, but he’s not protective and backing her up at all.

What a dumb FBI agent…

Whyyyyyy is the FMC so whiny??????!! She thinks she’s all tough and speaks to others as if she’s better than them, but as soon as she entered the forest, she started breaking down - mentally and physically.

The world is so confusing and not well explained.

Bad decisions after bad decisions, Aris… 🤦🏻‍♀️ maybe you will reach the gods’ land faster if you listened to Raker.

8 hours into the book and nothing has happened….

Tyler is such a dick who refuses to see the truth. For someone who has so much pull in the city, his own private investigator can’t even find truths.

What is the plot? Characters are doing things without any reason behind it. Everyone’s supposedly hundreds of years old yet act like children.

Charlotte apparently doesn’t like the wraith yet is jealous every single time. Wraith also hates Charlotte just for the heck of it??? Why? What did she ever do to him???

Why is FMC so freaking annoying and naive? 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

The writing is basic and the story keeps floating into useless scenes from the past.

If no one can remember her and she can’t have pictures taken, how did she travel from France to Europe?

It’s so slow and nothing has happened even though it’s over half way. 😑

How degrading…

Too long and boring.

More than halfway in and I still don’t know what the secret organization at the school does. And the chemistry between the two MC are not very deep, just surface level with not much chemistry.

Omg why is this so boring????

Kind of boring…no chemistry between man characters and confusing world.

Whoa….Arthur standing up for Vera in front of his people… Hot! 🥵 not to mention how he changed her flowers every week!!

Love Vera’s close friendship with Lancelot, but I hope it doesn’t end up like the stories from the future. It’ll break my heart if they end up together. I’m pining for Vera and Arthur!

Viktoria: *gets kidnapped, spanked, fxcked, and has absolutely no notable conversations or interactions with Rourke*

Also Viktoria: I’m in love with him.

Omgggggg FMC is soooo freaking annoying. I thought she was smart and strong but why did the author have to make her a dumb, jealous girl towards the end? She just assumed because he has a mate, that he played with her feelings, yet the man spent the whole book loving and protecting her. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Her parents took her away from the world at 5 years old and she did not see her grandpa, uncle, or cousins until 16 years later. The story starts when she’s only been back home for 3 weeks or so, yet she has become BFF’s with her cousins and would do anything to save their lives?? And she remembers her grandpa so well because his words impacted her growing up?? How could she have remembered that much at that age?