I don't know why I'm still reading this. The writing is weirdly juvenile, as is the FMC. And the author keeps doing this odd thing where she skips ahead. Like, chapter ends with character fine, normal. Next chapter, character is a prisoner, injured. She just did it for the second time, and it is hugely disorienting and irritating as hell.
— Jan 13, 2024 08:25PM
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