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Wow

Haidyn 🥰🥰

So far not a fan she’s to quick to forgive him about things he shouldn’t be forgiven for and honestly the story itself is just weak

I'm not liking Santiago at all he has absolutely no character and Elena is just lame it's kind of disappointing so far being she is Aidens daughter to me none of the kids so far I find intriguing I'm not saying the book is bad just saying they need more character build ups all of them

Holyshit how did I not know that colt,Finn,Alex,jenks are the same ones from Tyson’s book wtf 😳😳😳

I held or I hold? Come on

Why s the writer writing in past tense “she nodded ,she begged,if he didn’t walk out “ it’s confusing me😂

Sometimes you have to make a situation make sense….

Okay now I’m getting whiplash…..is this book about Gia or Jess?

Okay is it just me or is this book mixed up it went from the drav and dravin with Gia at the party to Jess on winter break which I’m confused because the party happened after winter break…don’t get me wrong I love the story I’m hooked but I kind of wish the writer would pull the book back and correct all these mistakes because now it’s noticeable….

There are a lot of annoying mistakes in this book but overall good story so far