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Who uses the word nervosity as an 18 year old? No one Lola king. No one.
How is your FMC amazing at MMA but does nada when drinking Caden comes a calling.

I can see I am going to hate this book if I finish it that is.

Great so now we discover that Lexi us just as bad as Kade. She has also killed men too for reasons.
We now learn that apparently Kade is in the mob the undergoes or sone shit.
She knows them, knows who the crime family is he watched her kill someone else in the family. Now he wants to take over the organisation.
Give me strenght please

She thinks she looks like a hideous beast. He thinks she is gorgeous.
She finds her phone whilst he is gone, turns it on, it has juice but she calls her boyfriend and leave a voicemail. Not 911 to track her but her bf who broke up with her. Kill me now from vad writing.

What us with women assuming they can't get pregnant because it hadn't happened previously with another lover so of course this random man can't get her knocked up now. The man gave her some plan b, but no she knows better.

Aching member, then cock in the same scene. Like author pick a fucking time period and stick to it. Pick a term for the penis I beg.

So she let him fuck her because she got spooked about the other women trophies he held in the room he took her in. A whole thing there, but Kade POV for this is so strange. Her body reaction being more than he could hope for, a dark sense of pride as she came, no one could have done what he did like what now.

Then her POV reasoning yeah its all okay if she wants him.

Save me from bad writing. Delusional Kade is all I am seeing here. Now I am going to hate read this to find out who he is etc.

When you hear the word negligence, or skimpy lingerie does that image also evoke the same one as nighty?

How can an author in one scene imagine silk negligee alongside image of nighty. I kept seeing red barely there then cotton nightgown.

Also I hate these characters.

Please remind me how old these people are again.

What utter tripe. My eyes are bleeding from the utter shit this has been so far. Why my god why.

Is this character a 10 year old? The language is surely not that of a 10 year old in a world that is starving, because why does she sound like a 16 year old from 2025 who is on insta or tt?
If the setting is 2091, please for the love of all write in 2091.

So I can't decide if Lark wanted Gabe to have sex with her just so her pride isn't hurt or what.
They just had sex because his Omega told them to over the phone, very clinical, still in party clothes, because at 3am Elliot was still horny.

How are these men adults. Like over 30 year old men adults?
Also how annoying when the author insists on putting references to current/ past TV shows. For instance CHP 9, Bryce POV, he notes they are moving her stuff into their house and Elliot keeps going Pivot...a joke obviously from Sitcom Friends. But why??????

Why oh why has the author placed this book in an academy. This may have been better in a jail or a detention house or something, not school.
The men are all criminal drug lords or the other, all over I believe 25 have careers but have to go back to an academy which doesn't really get a good explanation as to why it exists.

Also why do authors think it's so cute to put current events into their books.

Urghh, everything is a lovely convoluted story

Nope got out early, the writing of the characters started doing my head in.

so another DNF for me.

Okay

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Chapter 6- I'm already annoyed by everyone especially the MMCs Alphas. It's like excuse me, you just bought a slave from an auction which is clearly illegal. Clearly you have to have an idea that the women aren't there to catch an Alpha but are there against their will.
However once buying this female you treat her like yesterday garbage, etc. Sloppy writing.

What fresh hell is this bullshit? Oh please what normal people would ask and think it's normal for a 20 year old old to be cleaning for 5 years and don't think it's weird.

The writing in this is giving very juvenile, wattpad writing.

Interesting. Some books were good others were a bit meh.

A good read.