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Is this character a 10 year old? The language is surely not that of a 10 year old in a world that is starving, because why does she sound like a 16 year old from 2025 who is on insta or tt?
If the setting is 2091, please for the love of all write in 2091.

So I can't decide if Lark wanted Gabe to have sex with her just so her pride isn't hurt or what.
They just had sex because his Omega told them to over the phone, very clinical, still in party clothes, because at 3am Elliot was still horny.

How are these men adults. Like over 30 year old men adults?
Also how annoying when the author insists on putting references to current/ past TV shows. For instance CHP 9, Bryce POV, he notes they are moving her stuff into their house and Elliot keeps going Pivot...a joke obviously from Sitcom Friends. But why??????

Why oh why has the author placed this book in an academy. This may have been better in a jail or a detention house or something, not school.
The men are all criminal drug lords or the other, all over I believe 25 have careers but have to go back to an academy which doesn't really get a good explanation as to why it exists.

Also why do authors think it's so cute to put current events into their books.

Urghh, everything is a lovely convoluted story

Nope got out early, the writing of the characters started doing my head in.

so another DNF for me.

Okay

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Chapter 6- I'm already annoyed by everyone especially the MMCs Alphas. It's like excuse me, you just bought a slave from an auction which is clearly illegal. Clearly you have to have an idea that the women aren't there to catch an Alpha but are there against their will.
However once buying this female you treat her like yesterday garbage, etc. Sloppy writing.

What fresh hell is this bullshit? Oh please what normal people would ask and think it's normal for a 20 year old old to be cleaning for 5 years and don't think it's weird.

The writing in this is giving very juvenile, wattpad writing.

Interesting. Some books were good others were a bit meh.

A good read.

Hmm maybe, not really feeling this here book. Expected more fire, more fun or something. It's dragging here already. All these hyped up 5 stars though so I'll keep trudging. Hopes it gets better

I'm not that enamored with Shaun, as she constantly goes on about Jai, but hey every other male wants her so she will pack mate with them.
I'm just curious about how many men will form part of her harem, and why does the two guys who already form part of a mate-bond have to become hers too.
understand the old Alphas fear,because she is capable of having mates come to her outside of their own matebond. Travesty

oh wow, they fucked she finally branded Redemption as her own, and the cure is broken.

Gives Mab the drops of her own fucked up aphrodasiac and just like that it's all over.

Now they want to get married to her. aww shucks

so here we have Redemption drugged up with a fae aphrodisiac and locked up by the Queen. Enters Lorn and her men to free him. How o we do this..by fucking him of course, bind them all as a harem for Lorn. yipee.

At this stage the only thing i got was how similar this was to The merry Gentry series.

Book 4.

Just hurry up and end

totally getting the vibe that this whole book was about getting Redemption into Lorn's bed again and as part of the harem.

Author obviously wrote herself in a corner earlier and whoopsie, here is how this will be undone.