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Not sure I'm gonna make it! The dialogue is
relentlessly boring. Like reading a transcription of someone's daily life. The main protagonist comes off petulant and weak, and some of "her boys" make me cringe.
There is lack of world building, but at the beginning it seemed to have potential.

I don't know how much more I can take. It's boring....and too many explicit scenes that don't do anything for the story...

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whew...almost made it.

I wish I had a who's who glossary. It's a little confusing.