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Jayah
is 46% done
Not sure I'm gonna make it! The dialogue is
relentlessly boring. Like reading a transcription of someone's daily life. The main protagonist comes off petulant and weak, and some of "her boys" make me cringe.
There is lack of world building, but at the beginning it seemed to have potential.
— Jan 03, 2022 01:22PM
relentlessly boring. Like reading a transcription of someone's daily life. The main protagonist comes off petulant and weak, and some of "her boys" make me cringe.
There is lack of world building, but at the beginning it seemed to have potential.
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