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Valor new partner has a giant chip on her shoulder. She is rude and condescending. I really hope it gets better.

It is good but damn can we get a scene without thoughts of Rick or Pat. From Hair gel to food to family to buterflies to sex....RICK....RICK...RICK...RICK. He is everywhere I feel like reading a weird love triangle between a dead guy and the MCs.

SHILOAH IS A FUCKING MAN CHILD. He refuses to listen to Jackson and it is frustrating. On the verge of DNFing

I was expecting a slow burn. It has been stated multiple times that Shiloah is Demi and hasnt kissed anyone in 10 years. YET, 3 days (26%) into meeting Jackson they are making out and talking about possible BJs? He did not even like Jackson day one because he stereotyped him as straight.

Im disappointed so far. 55% in and the stalker has won at every turn. They sit in the house for most of it reading texts from the stalker. The one time they leave she got close enough to bump into Mac then disappeared. They are in a house full of people so only 2 kisses have happened.

If this is what it feels like to fall in love with your best friend—this slow, steady, undeniable realization that everything you’ve ever wanted has been standing beside you the whole time—then I’m the luckiest man alive.

****swooning******

We are 60% in why are MCs still talking about JJs Ex Myles?!
For context. JJ and Myles dated before the book started. Myles left him for Cooper(JJs teammate) who he crushed on all through high school. Myles and JJ only kissed a few times how is he not over the whole situation! Frustrating.

Im disappointed so far. It is really repetitive. Blake keeps coming to the same realizations over and over they are just discussed differently.
TOPICS: -Loves Luke -Mad at Maddox -You left me
and Becca .... I'm on the verge of DNFing. The fact that he was with Luke's sister for two years is awkward enough but she keeps being brought up. Then Luke and Becca talk about her "not earth shattering" sex with Blake.WHY?

Ok, this is NOT fast paced 0 to 46% was a lot of yelling/snarling from Rio, and Lyric was unconscious/delirious the whole time. 47% to 69% Lyric woke up and told his story, Rio had a cage fight and a blow job/handjob happened between MCs :( The reviews said fast-paced. I'm so disappointed!! ughhh

Just hit the 47% mark and Im disappointed Lyric has spent 40% of the book so far in bed delirious( from injuries) after arriving at the Redcar. The only other activity is Enzo and Rio yelling at him and finally, him waking up long enough to give Jamie a code. They also discussed Kessler and then he went back to sleep.

Hopefully it picks up from here

I'm really close to DNFing. It is so boring and creepy at points.
"The way he’d twitch and writhe, tiny legs sprawled wide while he fought to take me. “I do.”
Tiny legs really?!

*buns'* was used 17 times in 12 pages........childish jokes. Let's hope it gets better

Cringy dialogue so far. Ty and his straight best friend Sam. (NOT WORD FOR WORD)
Sam: Hey man I was worried sick.
Ty: Sorry I was with Leo. He is perfect!
Sam: Has he been violent at all?
TY: Not at all
Sam: If I know you his dick has already been down your throat.
Ty: lol.. Sam listens to my sexcapades
Sam: Beth wants you happy. She wants to set you up with her filthy co-worker.
Ty: Thanks but no thanks I'm happy

Eeek! Im LOVING the tension! Definitely instalove but Im giddy for it!

I'm confused about how William has fucked all these people, Yet freaked out when Ryan saw his back scars.
He thinks about how he has fucked someone in mid day on a yacht and threesomes with foreign government officials.
Did he do it all with a shirt on?

So far Iris has talked about and/or thought about banging almost every team member. Also fucked his way through basic "because he couldn't have Saint". Even during the initial sex scene between MCs Iris talked about his other fucks and then,dick in mouth, thought about other things. 2 pages worth of thinking until his mouth was thrusted into and he remembered he was mid blowjob. Please pick up or Ill DNF.

After MCs hook up MC Jamie goes on the hunt for one night stands. He tried several times but doesnt actually do more that kissing.

Umm...I hope it gets better....Are we supposed to just gonna skip over the fact that Enzo called up a fuck buddy the same night he was supposed to meet up with Zane?? They were on their way back to Enzo's to fuck when a gunman pops up. Zane and his cop brother save the day. Enzo ends up going home with Zane instead and gives him a BJ... ugghhh Enzo couldnt just wait on Zane to begin with??

They have spent 36% wanting each other but also thinking about and almost hooking up with others to "get over" each other. I hope that changes soon. I almost DNFd when Ro brought someone to the yacht for a hook up only to have Andrew send him away.

FmC is coming off as a self-centered bitch. ME, ME, ME.


Ill stick it out a little longer but something has got to give.

Currently annoyed with how much Judah thinks about every hot piece of ass he has encountered.....producer, hair dresser, childhood friend teddy, other dancers.....

VERY REPETITIVE
Several Factual Errors
* Killians strapped a pistol to his chest while preparing to seach for hannah,

“Copy that. Out.” Armed with my Glock in my chest holster and a hunting knife in a sheath strapped to my thigh

Yet when he finds her and starts to carry her out, she says, “I hope you’re armed,” I say. “They took my gun and knife.”
***Ummmm. It's strapped to his chest***

So far, Im really enjoying the role reversal. She is the millionaire, and he is a recently fired park ranger.
The way she spoils this man 😏

Ummm so far........ I thought he was supposed to be the grumpy one but FMC is bitchy, with a chip on her shoulder.

Im on ch 4. It is slow starting off, tons of backstory and such.

So far, neither of the MCs are likable. FmC is trying to fuck information from people. She is also a lying, conniving bitch. And MMC is a complete asshole.