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whimsry is 28% done with Take Me Apart (Vitale Brothers, #1)
The story is kinda interesting but something about the writing is making the characters awkward
Jul 03, 2026 06:33PM Add a comment
Take Me Apart (Vitale Brothers, #1)

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whimsry is on page 321 of 592 of A Smile Full of Lies: An Obsessed Neighbor Dark Romance (Secrets of Stonewood)
Enjoying it. Very hot. Didn't realize masks and chasing did a little something 👀 but lots of repetition and long-winded prose. Slows the story down and makes it tiring to read. Needed tighter editing
Jul 03, 2026 06:30PM Add a comment
A Smile Full of Lies: An Obsessed Neighbor Dark Romance (Secrets of Stonewood)

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whimsry is 18% done with Coerce (Death in Bloom, #1)
The prose is just too awkward. Tragic
Jul 02, 2026 08:24AM Add a comment
Coerce (Death in Bloom, #1)

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whimsry is on page 187 of 393 of Pretty Poisoned (Gods of Tomorrow #1)
The writing is stilted somehow. I might come back to it
May 24, 2026 09:31PM Add a comment
Pretty Poisoned (Gods of Tomorrow #1)

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whimsry is on page 188 of 482 of The Lost God
Apr 24, 2026 08:45PM 1 comment
The Lost God

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