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Ughhhh! I have no idea if this story is good or not because every other sentence has some sort of grammatical issue (missing word, incorrect word choice, or missing punctuation). It’s so distracting I can’t enjoy the story.

Initial thought is that this is a HUGE file, and not much time to read the arc. Received on 9/1 review due 9/8. Wish we were given 2 full weeks Plus I'm afraid this is going to be like 50 shades. So far too there have been some language discrepancies. It's set in Boston, but a few British sayings/terms have been used.

So far very cheese storyline.

So far, I'm not liking how the chapters are broken up, it feels like its right in the middle of the action that we end one chapter and start the next. And while I love the story between the main characters, but I'm not liking all the sex. (I know, shocker!) But its too much! Every other scene is sex. There is no development in the characters at all.

I'm not sure about this story yet. The male lead is so egotistical that it makes me sick, while the female lead makes me curious about who she is & what she's gonna do. Jury's still out on this story. I stopped & picked up another, but will get back to this soon.