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i think that was the last of the mayfair file chapters and to that i say HALLELUJAH. truly a slogfest to get through, so much telling and next to no showing. inefficient storytelling methinks, there has to be a better way to convey the relevant information to the reader

the mystery setup feels pretty weak methinks😔😔

First of all: EWWWWWW
Second: there are sooooo many passages in here that could be posted on r/MenWritingWomen, how on earth was this written by a woman

a little insta lovey, but for some reason it works??

Signa is a little too naive for my liking sometimes but it seems like she’s leaning?

ugh, the michael chapters🤢🤢🤮

enda mer banning? næmmen herr høverstad da

omg banneord? i miiiiiin harry potter bok, it’s more likely that you think. skandale oliver wood, skandale

i am once again in dire need of comfort that only nostalgia can give me😔

blurbed by both leigh bardugo and holly black, please please please don’t let me down🙏🙏

i love it when something happens that makes me slam the book shut, say "oh no oh no oh no", and gives me the need to walk around the house like a maniac for a minute before i feel ready to continue <3 good book <3

still can’t get over the fact that her name is galaxy ‘alex’ stern

"Give people a reason to root for you. This is your Reputation phase … "

ÆÆÆÆÆ MODERNE REFERANSER, MY IMMERSION, hvorfor er BetterHelp og Guy Fieri her😭😭🤢🤮

aaand we have an eye color description!! i repeat, we have an eye color description for the male romantic lead!! (warm brown)

"and he was tall, and muscular, and handsome"

like i can just make something up in my head but come on, WHAT DOES HE LOOK LIKE??? PLEASE GIVE ME SOMETHING TO WORK WITH HERE????????

TALL FEMALE MAIN CHARACTER LET’S GOOOOOOO

(i am on a roll this year)

TALL FEMALE MAIN CHARACTER LET’S GOOOOO

TALL FEMALE MAIN CHARACTER LET’S GOOOO

✨bonedog✨

uuughskskdhdjs- a trope i hate and didn’t know was in here :( askdflskjdgshsjs

I think the author is going for a jurdan style "oh no she has a knife to my throat but it’s hot" and it’s not landing for me at all😭😭

literally twirling my hair, blushing, kicking my feet😩😩

at first i was like lol this lukas guy is swedish but this is apparently an issue for me. it’s so weird to read about for some reason idk??

i’m in dire need of comfort that only nostalgia can give me, it is what it is

I get that sometimes characters have to do stupid things in order for there to be plot, but Oak has this lack of self-preservation which leads to exceptionally stupid decisions GET IT TOGETHER DUDE

third-person pov, my beloved

i’m a simple girl: i see a manon chapter and the little german boy in my head goes YIIIIPPEEEEE

"there were legends whispered over fires about the other skin maeve wore. no one had lived to tell anything beyond shadows and claws and a darkness to devour your soul."

AISH THIS BITCH