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So far, this book has been 40% crying, 50% sex, and 10% plot. Mostly still reading because GR won't let me have a dnf without classifying as read, reading or want to read. I'm also 90% certain I can guess the ending resolution

CALLED IT.

Whelp, now someone has been shot, and despite one of them being a doctor and the other a mercenary... nobody puts pressure on the wound. *Sigh*

Well, now, despite Cannon's heightened senses, they're being held hostage. Again. And Ryver just lunged forward, even though in the last paragraph, the man holding her had a knife to her throat.

Oh! Wound has appeared again!

I don't even know why I'm still reading this. Maybe for the sheer WTF factor? During this ridiculous escapade of a 'rescue' Ryver has had a mysteriously disappearing 'severe' wound, they raided a farmhouse with a truck out front and DIDN'T TAKE THE TRUCK (Or, apparently, any food), and now, a mysterious crying infant.
Was there no editor to reign in the very obvious plot holes? Am I the only one who pays attention?

So not a fan of plot moppets. ESPECIALLY SECRET BABY PLOT MOPPETS. And then, add in, 'who's your daddy' style anxiety, and I am OVER it. However, I am liking Cal's anxiety-as someone who also has anxiety, I feel his pain. But really, I am only reading this to complete the series and follow the wider overarching plot to get to the next instalment

I'm disappointed, to be honest. I was really hoping that she wouldn't be as Mary Sue as possible and collect the entire set, but...

The plot seems to consist solely of 'we must have sex with my mating fist to bond!' which... is boring. So far the book seems to be 90% sex. Sex that doesn't really seem to do anything except illustrate physical attraction. I doubt I'll finish this. I feel like I know (and care) more about the sister than I do Olivia.

Mildly concerned--he has a 'mating fist' at the base of his cock. A mating FIST... this does not bode well. Also unimpressed that the twin and bestie didn't automatically bring her something to wear or at least cover up with.
AND WHY DOES HE DROP HIS Gs?!?!?!

Mildly concerned--he has a 'mating fist' at the base of his cock. A mating FIST... this does not bode well. Also unimpressed that the twin and bestie didn't automatically bring her something to wear or at least cover up with.

Mildly concerned--he has a 'mating fist' at the base of his cock. A mating FIST... this does not bode well. Also unimpressed that the twin and bestie didn't automatically bring her something to wear or at least cover up with.

And I'm done. 'You're my mate, so you're biologically superior...' I haven't raged like this at a book in ages

Oh, and now she's 'secretly happy' because she's prettier than another woman. Because that's what matters in life. Doesn't matter that you were kidnapped 2 days ago. That you tried to escape less than 12 hours ago... Nope. You smelled the hot guy, and you're prettier than the other woman, so life must be perfect

Oh, and now she's 'secretly happy' because she's prettier than another woman. Because that's what matters in life. Doesn't matter that you were kidnapped 2 days ago. That you tried to escape less than 12 hours ago... Nope. You smelled the hot guy, and you're prettier than the other woman, so life must be perfect

Ok, I call BS. She's been forcibly transitioned, she's been KIDNAPPED and held PRISONER and yet... On page 51 'she knew she would stay'. Because they called her pretty and her stalker Mate smells sexy?!?

Neeeext! On to another new novel. At least this one is by an author I've read before and know I will probably enjoy.

Not a huge fan of the current novel-Bait, the Angler Book One-but it's not awful.

"Naked chick plus a shower stall equaled a bloody horrible death. Always. No exceptions."

Heh

Annnnnd.... I'm done. Star crossed teenage love.
Rend: "Just because I'm afraid of him [Devil] doesn't mean I couldn't destroy him if I wanted to,"
-what, are you five years old now?

DNF

Sacrifice Me, Season One; Sara Cannon
TSTL. The bad guy is *actually* called 'the Devil'. Perhaps I'm just not the target audience-the heroine is 21 and still in college, which I passed some time ago.