Lauren’s Reviews > Cannon > Status Update
Lauren
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Well, now, despite Cannon's heightened senses, they're being held hostage. Again. And Ryver just lunged forward, even though in the last paragraph, the man holding her had a knife to her throat.
— Apr 15, 2022 05:08PM
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Lauren
is on page 263 of 326
Whelp, now someone has been shot, and despite one of them being a doctor and the other a mercenary... nobody puts pressure on the wound. *Sigh*
— Apr 15, 2022 05:22PM
Lauren
is on page 157 of 326
I don't even know why I'm still reading this. Maybe for the sheer WTF factor? During this ridiculous escapade of a 'rescue' Ryver has had a mysteriously disappearing 'severe' wound, they raided a farmhouse with a truck out front and DIDN'T TAKE THE TRUCK (Or, apparently, any food), and now, a mysterious crying infant.
Was there no editor to reign in the very obvious plot holes? Am I the only one who pays attention?
— Apr 15, 2022 04:33PM
Was there no editor to reign in the very obvious plot holes? Am I the only one who pays attention?
