Was excited for this but I can’t figure out who its audience is. It’s got a weird obsession with propriety, like it’s trying to teach the reader how to behave/what is “right,” making it seem very YA. (And schoolmarm-ish.)
Stilted character interactions and obvious dialogue.
Yeah, this isn’t going to break my reading slump.
— 16 hours, 15 min ago
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