‘It was like he was wearing a uniform that screamed “bodyguard”, which somehow, suited him.’ GIRL, he IS a bodyguard! You actually wrote his character as a bodyguard character?! Why makes these types of obvious statements?! Why not write: the way he wore that black pants, shows and sunglasses suited his bodyguard persona. That would be more accurate.
— Apr 12, 2025 10:05AM
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