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Something about this isn't really clicking with me. It feels very heavy handed with its messaging but also like the writing and sentence structure is overly simplistic. And on top of that I don't like any of the characters and the direction of the story is going towards a vigilante cop so.

Now this is some good shit right here

Interesting style so far. Broken up into short PoV chapters for various characters.

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I'm gonna be honest... the story was so much more interesting when Joe had fucked off. The romance is 1000% the worst part of this book. The lore is actually fairly interesting. The description of pack dynamics and the development of a human alpha forming a primarily human pack is pretty damn good.

Then Joe comes back and they reconcile in a week and it just sucks the life out of it

Okay the book has moved from "incredibly uncomfortable" to "comically absurd"

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from the scene of the underage werewolf walking out of the woods in booty shorts causing the adult to literally walk into a house to the scene where the werewolf literally asks the other guys mom for permission to court him with his family listening from the window to saying he wants to have his blood in his claws????

Absurd.

I'm not gonna lie, I kinda hate this. The dynamics so far in this book just make me so uncomfortable.

Y'know when Jacob imprints on Bella's newborn daughter in Twilight and how fucking WEIRD it was? This book is basically that in reverse where a 12 year old imprints on a 16-17 year old and it just feels weird.

Apparently theres going to be a time skip at some point and when I tell you I can' t wait for it

I'm not being the least bit dramatic when I say I would die for Theodore

Things are getting fun 👀