Lee’s Reviews > Bloodraven > Status Update
Lee
is starting
The wiring is decent, but a little confusing at times, like it could have done with another edit/proofread to improve clarity.
— Feb 20, 2025 05:29AM
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Lee
is finished
Aww I wish there was more to the ending.. like, they JUST reunited, and it's over. Give us a little more. An epilogue. I know there's like a graphic novel or whatever, but uhh.. it's ugly........
— Feb 24, 2025 08:43PM
Lee
is 90% done
Why the fuck did the author think ah, yes, let's have Yhalen fuck someone else now?? Ew. Ew ew ew.
— Feb 24, 2025 07:14PM
Lee
is 49% done
Reviews made it sound like this was a brutal, violent sex fest from start to finish, but I am very pleasantly surprised by how much other stuff is going on. Like, there's not even as much sex as most of the shitty romance novels I've suffered through lately. There’s a plot! Honestly, no idea what's going to happen through the rest of the book, but it seems like you're just fine if you can get past chapter one.
— Feb 22, 2025 07:35AM
Lee
is 25% done
Okay, I'm enjoying this quite a bit so far, but it really needs some editing. This is why we have proofreaders, folks.
— Feb 20, 2025 06:10PM
Lee
is 10% done
I wish there weren't illustrations included in here.. not because they're graphic or anything. They're just kinda bad.
— Feb 20, 2025 08:12AM
Lee
is starting
Wow. Kudos to the author for making me care about a character who literally dies in line one.
— Feb 20, 2025 05:20AM

