Lee’s Reviews > Bloodraven > Status Update

Aww I wish there was more to the ending.. like, they JUST reunited, and it's over. Give us a little more. An epilogue. I know there's like a graphic novel or whatever, but uhh.. it's ugly........

Why the fuck did the author think ah, yes, let's have Yhalen fuck someone else now?? Ew. Ew ew ew.

Reviews made it sound like this was a brutal, violent sex fest from start to finish, but I am very pleasantly surprised by how much other stuff is going on. Like, there's not even as much sex as most of the shitty romance novels I've suffered through lately. There’s a plot! Honestly, no idea what's going to happen through the rest of the book, but it seems like you're just fine if you can get past chapter one.

Okay, I'm enjoying this quite a bit so far, but it really needs some editing. This is why we have proofreaders, folks.

The wiring is decent, but a little confusing at times, like it could have done with another edit/proofread to improve clarity.

Wow. Kudos to the author for making me care about a character who literally dies in line one.