Rachel’s Reviews > Lethal Magic > Status Update
Rachel
is 31% done
So far I’m pretty frustrated with this one.
1. NUMEROUS typos. So many missing words that change the meaning of the sentence without them.
2. Very SO slow start & I don’t care for any of the characters.
3. Took me almost a full chapter to realize I was in someone else’s POV because it was in hard to read font on a teeny image at the top of the chapter. It needed to be made way more clear.
— Feb 23, 2025 12:03PM
1. NUMEROUS typos. So many missing words that change the meaning of the sentence without them.
2. Very SO slow start & I don’t care for any of the characters.
3. Took me almost a full chapter to realize I was in someone else’s POV because it was in hard to read font on a teeny image at the top of the chapter. It needed to be made way more clear.
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Rachel
is 31% done
OMG I AM SOO BORED WOTH DECLAN’S POV! It’s not only boring, but it’s making no sense. Along with trying to shove his history at us in the middle of the action, it just makes it that much worse.
Pretty sure I’m on the cusp of DNF’ing this.
— Feb 23, 2025 12:24PM
Pretty sure I’m on the cusp of DNF’ing this.
