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secondary-character-led Black Moment

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Going to Spain doesn't really make sense here

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the feeling of furious betrayal Jealousy is a bit much here

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the way your dad lied time after time to your mum This is very different and don't think she should conflate the two

KINDLE NOTES. SPOILERS


Good. Glad he realised he'd be taking advantage of her memory loss.

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The dr tells her she's a virgin! This really doesn’t work. Tests for a brain injury/trauma don’t usually include internals! Unless I’m missing something. Quite a big suspension of disbelief hurdle to get over. There’s a conversation that needs to be had, but would prefer it to be character-led.

a bit left field

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Lorry crash breaks their emotional impasse. Would prefer it to be character-led. Forced together emotionally because she has engagement ring stuck on her finger/amnesia so plot-led engagement.

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ring stuck on finger small suspension of disbelief in the scheme of things and it's near the beginning

Plot device