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Dottie moves from Kit’s neck, shaking a tiny fist and chittering loudly. That makes O chuckle and he holds up his hands defensively. “Okay, bitty brawler. I get it. Don’t tease him right now. Message received.”
“I cannot believe you guys talk to that rat,” Jasper grumbles. “It’s insane.”
Zavida clears his throat, his face pained as he looks up at the Prince.
Apr 05, 2025 09:13PM
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So. It was long and this really needs a better editor cause a lot of stuff just didn’t make sense and I feel it could’ve been shorten. Besides that I really enjoyed this. I also think Kit and Jasper scenes were a bit annoying to read because both parties lacked communication.

4 stars because it was long and annoying at times but I liked it. I thought it’d be 3.5 stars in the beginning.
Apr 13, 2025 08:22PM
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The past few months have taught me a lot about how his moods and his condition work, so I know I’m right.
The muffled sounds of protest get louder and I blow out a slow breath as I finally loosen my grip until I can look down at him. His expression is angry, but I see the fear sparking in his eyes. I open my mouth to comment on it, but suddenly, all I can focus on is the tongue that darts out to lick his lips.
Apr 13, 2025 05:16PM
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Child of the Underworld huh

The stocky red-headed man furrows his brow. “Why should I entertain a child of the Underworld and his pet?”
“Excuse me?” I blurt before I can stop. “No need to be fucking rude.”
“It’s not common for your kind to mingle with ours in this realm.” The dwarf shrugs, tilting his head as he studies us with zero repentance.
Apr 13, 2025 03:05PM
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That is, if we can get to them without being paged to the royal tents.
“This is gorgeous,” Kat says, the awe in her voice apparent. “Is this what their realm looks like? Cuz you guys got screwed, man.”
Jasper snorts, shaking his head as he looks around. “This is being controlled by the Daybreak Court at the moment.
Apr 13, 2025 02:22PM
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“You could introduce yourself, since you seem to be adept at guessing who we are,” Kit grumbles and we all stare at him in shock.
This was not the diplomacy I’d hoped for, but at least it wasn’t Jasper.
A bark of laughter escapes the enormous spider, his legs moving quickly as he scurries up to the kid. “You… You are not a royal at all, are you?
Apr 12, 2025 11:57PM
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“Please don’t hurt yourself,” I murmur as I grab the drinks and pad over to sit them on the table by the couch. “Anton will be upset if you re-injure yourself and Jasper will definitely blame me for it.”
They wait until I get to my chair and settle in before they wink. “I promise I won’t fuck up my healing. A simple shift is not going to set me back.”
Dottie climbs up next to me, her big eyes fixed on
Apr 08, 2025 10:48PM
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Isn’t it Annie’s?????

The big guy’s words make me bristle a bit, and despite it being stupid to question such a boon, I can’t help shaking my head, “Uh-uh. No way. I don’t want to owe anyone, especially not Jasper or his shithead father.”
“Don’t be stubborn, little demon.”
Apr 07, 2025 09:07PM
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I’d swear he’s pouting, but how the hell does one identify that on a shark shifter?
Xerxes moves slower than me, but they get up on the table to Slash’s left and I head for the one on the right. Once we’re settled, Dank gives me a weird skull-faced smile again. “Excellent. We are all in agreement, then. I will mix the things I need and return shortly.”
Apr 07, 2025 01:40PM
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I let out a relieved breath as he comes back over and the others slowly make their way inside. Oriel guides Salem to the next table and for the first time since the battle, he shifts.The panda looks a bit ragged,which isn’t surprising since he went full rage mode on a shit ton of opponents while Kit worked to protect X.Honestly,I thought it would be worse, but being in his animal form likely helped him heal faster.
Apr 04, 2025 08:12AM
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Kit’s a pain demon?
Apr 03, 2025 10:00PM
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average  human “Not really, Jas. Familiars are very intelligent; they often have the ability to understand their companion perfectly. It’s possible being in the caliphate means that extends to us as well. I’d have to do more research but…”
Kit curses under her breath, then mutters, “I knew she could understand me! I thought I was nuts at first.”
“You might be, but not for that reason,” Zavida says with a tiny grin.
I really enjoy how she brings everyone in our family out of their shells; it’s refreshing as fuck.
“Bad Zavvie!” she scolds and a low, dark growl echoes in the room. The emerging demon whips her head to follow the sound and frowns at Jasper. “What the fuck is your problem now? Even X said we were doing well, and now you want to spoil it?”
Jasper’s dragon flashes in his eyes as he drops a hand to the kitsune’s head and ruffles his messy hair. “You do not get to call him that, nor scold him. That is not your place, shrimp.”
I blink, realizing Kit knows fuck all about BDSM roles and definitely not as they work between demons like us. Jas is going to rip her a new asshole because she inadvertently crossed a major boundary. Before he can pounce, I cut in. “KK, you know how some of us share your nickname?”
“Yeah, but Salem bitched at first.”
Salem coughs and has to cover his mouth, so I continue helping. “Well, there’s a reason why our animals or demons don’t like that concept. It might be a bit much for you at the moment, but it’s pretty unnatural for such a moniker to be shared. They prefer their own personal term of endearment, so to speak.”
Her eyes narrow and she squints at Slash. “Is that why you always call me ‘little demon?’ That’s yours?”
He nods then cocks his chin at Jasper. “He uses shrimp.”
“Huh. So you two suck at sharing and the others have evolved? That tracks.”
Jasper growls again, and this time, Annie jumps in. “No, their animals are the bigger predators and therefore prone to being… demanding. It’s very likely everyone will find their own eventually and Salem will feel much better. But the point here is that the name you used is very personal for the Prince for a multitude of reasons that you may learn some other time.”
“Not fucking likely,” Jasper mutters.
“Maybe.”
Everyone but Kit looks at Zavida in surprise and his face flames immediately, sending him back into his tails fast enough to be a red blur of motion.
I’ll be damned twice now—even the most submissive dude in our group just defied the Prince for the girl who has no idea what she’s gotten herself into.
This is going to be so very, very fun to watch unfold.


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By the time we bedded down, I was so exhausted I could barely keep my eyes open. Oriel and Salem curled up by my legs instead of their chairs, making Jasper get even grumpier as he finally shut off the lights. I honestly didn’t get all the weird looks and growls being traded around me, but boys are fucking weird.
If they’ve got something shoved up their asses, it’s not my responsibility to help pull it out.
However, the way they’re all violently getting ready in the bathroom this morning tells me I was right. Jasper is brushing his teeth like he’s going to scrub off the enamel. Oriel and Salem have been jerkily fussing with the gel in their hair for much longer than normal. Slash is quieter than ever, but he’s flashing his teeth occasionally as he looks in the mirror. Poor Zavida keeps ducking in and out of his tails as he does his morning self-care, while Anton is grunting in irritation as he helps Xerxes get cleaned up and pretty. The wings on X’s eyeliner are T. Swift sharp for certain.
Clearing my throat, I look around as I step out of my stall. I have my remaining uniform on, but it’s messier than usual because I refuse to tighten anything against the healing wound. “So… what’s the plan for today?”
Seven heads whip around to pin me with their gaze and the intensity makes me back up a bit. Salem’s face lightens as he smiles at me, his gorgeous torso on display all the way down to a very defined pelvic V above his pants. “There you are, Kit Kat. I thought you’d drowned for a second.”
Ha, ha. I was hoping you assholes would get dressed so my tongue wouldn’t feel too big for my fucking mouth, but here we are.
“It’s harder to get my shit on with the shoulder.” Plus, I had to use the ACE bandage I swiped from our medicine cabinet to bind myself until I can get X alone to chat. “Don’t fuss at me.”
A snort makes me turn to look at Jasper and I swallow hard as my eyes take in his broad shoulders, muscled back and the dragon spikes he always wears. He looks dangerous as fuck, even half-naked. But despite my mixed feelings about the spicy Prince, my whole body feels hot when he finally looks at me. “Someone has to. You take far too many risks, even when they’re with good intentions, and you don’t seem the least bit concerned with the fact that someone is actively instructing people to kill you.”
“Of course he’s concerned.”
My eyes swing to Slash when he speaks, and my mouth gets dry. The enormous shark shifter is using some kind of moisturizer on his thick biceps and boy, does it make my stomach flutter to watch. I push out a slow breath, hoping to calm myself before I speak. I’d prefer my voice not come out like Minnie fucking Mouse, and I’m not sure it won’t right now.
Anton saves me as he leads X to a bench to sit down. “You’re both right. Kit cares, but he’s unable to let any of us be harmed. That’s part of the caliphate bond and you all know it.”
“Yes,” Jasper grits out as he turns back to the mirror. “But he keeps getting hurt, which defies coincidence. He’s not being cautious enough and that has to change.”
“Kit is right here, and he does not like being talked about as if he isn’t.” I cross my arms over my chest as I finally find my voice. “I’m doing the best I can with shall we say… limited resources… in comparison to the people threatening me. You guys keep coming up with plans, but then Lucian or whoever the fuck, does something to put me right back in the hot seat. Stop blaming me for shit outside of my control.”
Xerxes gives me a thumbs up, and I dip my chin, oddly pleased that they agree with me. “It’s true. We have got to find out what the hell that dick is up to. It probably has something to do with his journey to the surface before the ball.”
Everyone is quiet for a moment as his statement sinks in, then the Prince nods. He spins to face us, his expression one of grim determination. “Xerxes is correct. However, it will take some time to arrange for an expedition to look into it. I’ll send word to my father that I require passes today.”
Passes? What the hell for?
My heart rate speeds a bit at the knowledge that the King will know anything about our efforts. I’m definitely not his favorite person now, and the guys—including his son—don’t seem to be in his favor often, either. Maybe this isn’t a good idea. Licking my lips, I raise my hand and Oriel chuckles until I yank it down. “Are we sure bringing him into our business is a good plan?”
“Absolutely not,” Jasper says with a smirk. “But I’ve spent most of my life finding ways to induce my father to grant his permission for things without telling him the real reason I’m doing them. I will make sure he doesn’t suspect our true aims.”
Slash nods. “That is accurate.”
“I hate to mention it, but our first class this morning is Arms,” Anton cuts in. “While Zavida may be okay to participate, I don’t think X or Kit should go. We need a reason to keep them out and someone to escort them, just in case.”
“We can go for a check-up with Dank,” I offer, eager to get Xerxes alone so I can talk to him about things I don’t want the others to know about.
“Mythology is useless to me. I am all too aware of the history of Hell,” Slash replies. “My free time is afterward, so I will take them to visit the doctor.”
Perfect. Slash will keep his distance if I ask, so I can talk to Xerxes on the way.
Jasper scratches his chin, then nods. “Acceptable. You will keep everyone but the doc away from them, then take X to Human History, where Oriel can take over. Kit will stay with you until we meet for lunch in the Triclinium.”
The shark shifter grins broadly and I breathe a sigh of relief. He, Salem, and Oriel are the easiest to be with when there’s no classes involved. I’m getting there with Xerxes and Anton, but I’m still nervous as hell with Zav. Jasper is a whole different enchilada and I don’t want to stay with him solo until I feel more secure in his support.
“Okay,” I murmur. “I can deal with that.”


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