mihi’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

Ngl, I really liked how THAT was foreshadowed, the moment it clicked for me was a real dopamine rush 🤣

The individual scenes are cool and all, but overall I am a bit lost. Can we have a map with all the islands and a run down of the plan of action, PLEASE?? And more consistent time references and maybe also a bit more character moments for the side characters

Iron flame and Onyx Storm both have the same fucking problem: they are written TOO DAMN FAST.