mihi’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update
mihi
is 80% done
Ngl, I really liked how THAT was foreshadowed, the moment it clicked for me was a real dopamine rush 🤣
— May 12, 2025 07:59AM
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mihi
is 55% done
The individual scenes are cool and all, but overall I am a bit lost. Can we have a map with all the islands and a run down of the plan of action, PLEASE?? And more consistent time references and maybe also a bit more character moments for the side characters
Iron flame and Onyx Storm both have the same fucking problem: they are written TOO DAMN FAST.
— May 06, 2025 03:52AM
Iron flame and Onyx Storm both have the same fucking problem: they are written TOO DAMN FAST.
