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Lilly A.
is 7% done
What’s up with the descriptions in this book? Nina is magic but she doesn’t know the word “satyr” and we have to read fifty times the description “centaur/goat child”? Just explain it once and readers will understand what a satyr/faun is.
Don’t even get me started on “green swamp monster” and the number of times I read the word “smell”
— May 25, 2025 07:47AM
Don’t even get me started on “green swamp monster” and the number of times I read the word “smell”
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Lilly A.
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“I’ve seen a lot. Boogeymen and sirens. Grey men and harpies”
Then why you spent a chapter calling a satyr a centaur goat-like creature?? Mariana I love you but your lore ain’t lore-ing in this one.
— Jun 21, 2025 08:11PM
Then why you spent a chapter calling a satyr a centaur goat-like creature?? Mariana I love you but your lore ain’t lore-ing in this one.
