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Who is it that rests in peace?’ The widow says, ‘Me

Okay so the plot is interesting and makes you empathize with the main character, but the language is far too modern for a setting in Ancient Greece. The use of 'they/them' as there's randomly a non-binary character is annoying tbh. There's a harpy attack and 'their nails digging into her skin' is about the they/them nails and not about those of the harpies. It slows me down as I have to reread sentences.

Loving the story so far but the modern language in this setting is throwing me off guard.