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average human
is 99% done
This took me longer than, I’d like to admit, to finish. I do plan on reading book 2 but for now imma hold off while waiting for ironside. I liked this book 4 stars because it drags when the POV’s switch.
— Jun 21, 2025 12:28AM
average human
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“My darling brother, did you throw my dearest Vanessa into a tornado?” Artemis doesn’t just speak the question with absolute calm, but she purrs the words with a promise that exudes death as she stalks Apollo.
Artemis terrifies me. She’s like that one chick we all know and warn our best friends away from, but they go for it anyway because there is something attractive about crazy.
— Jun 21, 2025 12:21AM
Artemis terrifies me. She’s like that one chick we all know and warn our best friends away from, but they go for it anyway because there is something attractive about crazy.
average human
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My smile turns wide and disbelieving, and I scramble naked off the bed, looking through my clothing for my phone.
“Not that I’m complaining about the view, but what are you doing?” I look over at him to note the sheet slowly lifting with his arousal.
Pointing a finger at him, I say, “No. Down, boy. I have a surprise.”
— Jun 20, 2025 11:18PM
“Not that I’m complaining about the view, but what are you doing?” I look over at him to note the sheet slowly lifting with his arousal.
Pointing a finger at him, I say, “No. Down, boy. I have a surprise.”
average human
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I shake my head as I glare at the door. Last thing I want is for my moms to think I’m as insane as my biological mother.
“Fine. I heard what they said.”
“Get out of my head,” I hiss at him. I rummage through the bag and grab panties from home and a black bra. Mama must have packed my bag, because she threw in my favorite black romper.
— Jun 19, 2025 12:38AM
“Fine. I heard what they said.”
“Get out of my head,” I hiss at him. I rummage through the bag and grab panties from home and a black bra. Mama must have packed my bag, because she threw in my favorite black romper.
average human
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And more, so much more. I can feel him deep inside me. Just a teasing dose of his essence now lives inside my soul, but I can sense the power of that singular taste and what I can do with it.
Find him. Call him to me.
Maybe it’s best if I just focus on Greyson and the way his pants hug the tight curves of his butt.
— Jun 18, 2025 04:23PM
Find him. Call him to me.
Maybe it’s best if I just focus on Greyson and the way his pants hug the tight curves of his butt.
average human
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Daisy saunters out of the diner, wearing ripped short shorts and a crop top that has seen better days. Her eyes are tired yet alert, just as they always are. Greyson idles at the curb, and the window squeals as he lowers it.
“Milkshake.” She passes the white foam cup through the window, and I salivate. “Strawberry.”
“You know me so well.” I suck on the deliciously flavored beverage and moan in pleasure.
— Jun 15, 2025 10:54PM
“Milkshake.” She passes the white foam cup through the window, and I salivate. “Strawberry.”
“You know me so well.” I suck on the deliciously flavored beverage and moan in pleasure.
average human
is 52% done
“No, you are a reptile.”
“Take it back.” My eyes click, and he turns opaque. “Dammit!” I yell, the film blinking back to normal a moment before the curtain flips open and Greyson walks in with another man. I barely look at him, though, because he has my little monster.
“I brought you a present,” he teases as he sits on the edge of my bed, holding Elliot in his arms.
— Jun 12, 2025 09:12PM
“Take it back.” My eyes click, and he turns opaque. “Dammit!” I yell, the film blinking back to normal a moment before the curtain flips open and Greyson walks in with another man. I barely look at him, though, because he has my little monster.
“I brought you a present,” he teases as he sits on the edge of my bed, holding Elliot in his arms.
average human
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So close. Closer than I’ve gotten in decades to the one being that can restore everything to the way it once was.
I saw the shadow of her form, the outline she cast in the sand. I passed her car where her scent lingered in the air like a tantalizing perfume. My body aches from just that teasing promise of her.
— Jun 08, 2025 09:12PM
I saw the shadow of her form, the outline she cast in the sand. I passed her car where her scent lingered in the air like a tantalizing perfume. My body aches from just that teasing promise of her.
average human
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“What do you know about him?” Greyson runs down the winding tunnel where torches flicker to life as we pass before dying slowly behind us.
“Archery.” I grunt, touching the side of my face where blood dries. My feet skid to a stop. “Greyson, if he is anything like Artemis, his arrow wouldn’t miss. He really wasn’t trying to kill me.” Which means Pim told the truth.
— Jun 07, 2025 05:36PM
“Archery.” I grunt, touching the side of my face where blood dries. My feet skid to a stop. “Greyson, if he is anything like Artemis, his arrow wouldn’t miss. He really wasn’t trying to kill me.” Which means Pim told the truth.
average human
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“I don’t believe in coincidences, Angel.” He licks his lips, and I can see the desire to kiss me in his gaze. “Where did you go today, Nes? Please.”
“It means that much to you?”
“Something far bigger than your secrets is happening right now, Angel.” He leans down, resting his forehead against mine as he inhales slowly. He can breathe me in like this only when he touches me.
— Jun 07, 2025 04:46PM
“It means that much to you?”
“Something far bigger than your secrets is happening right now, Angel.” He leans down, resting his forehead against mine as he inhales slowly. He can breathe me in like this only when he touches me.

