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“My darling brother, did you throw my dearest Vanessa into a tornado?” Artemis doesn’t just speak the question with absolute calm, but she purrs the words with a promise that exudes death as she stalks Apollo.
Artemis terrifies me. She’s like that one chick we all know and warn our best friends away from, but they go for it anyway because there is something attractive about crazy.
Jun 21, 2025 12:21AM
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This took me longer than, I’d like to admit, to finish. I do plan on reading book 2 but for now imma hold off while waiting for ironside. I liked this book 4 stars because it drags when the POV’s switch.
Jun 21, 2025 12:28AM
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My smile turns wide and disbelieving, and I scramble naked off the bed, looking through my clothing for my phone.
“Not that I’m complaining about the view, but what are you doing?” I look over at him to note the sheet slowly lifting with his arousal.
Pointing a finger at him, I say, “No. Down, boy. I have a surprise.”
Jun 20, 2025 11:18PM
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I shake my head as I glare at the door. Last thing I want is for my moms to think I’m as insane as my biological mother.
“Fine. I heard what they said.”
“Get out of my head,” I hiss at him. I rummage through the bag and grab panties from home and a black bra. Mama must have packed my bag, because she threw in my favorite black romper.
Jun 19, 2025 12:38AM
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And more, so much more. I can feel him deep inside me. Just a teasing dose of his essence now lives inside my soul, but I can sense the power of that singular taste and what I can do with it.
Find him. Call him to me.
Maybe it’s best if I just focus on Greyson and the way his pants hug the tight curves of his butt.
Jun 18, 2025 04:23PM
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Daisy saunters out of the diner, wearing ripped short shorts and a crop top that has seen better days. Her eyes are tired yet alert, just as they always are. Greyson idles at the curb, and the window squeals as he lowers it.
“Milkshake.” She passes the white foam cup through the window, and I salivate. “Strawberry.”
“You know me so well.” I suck on the deliciously flavored beverage and moan in pleasure.
Jun 15, 2025 10:54PM
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“No, you are a reptile.”
“Take it back.” My eyes click, and he turns opaque. “Dammit!” I yell, the film blinking back to normal a moment before the curtain flips open and Greyson walks in with another man. I barely look at him, though, because he has my little monster.
“I brought you a present,” he teases as he sits on the edge of my bed, holding Elliot in his arms.
Jun 12, 2025 09:12PM
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So close. Closer than I’ve gotten in decades to the one being that can restore everything to the way it once was.
I saw the shadow of her form, the outline she cast in the sand. I passed her car where her scent lingered in the air like a tantalizing perfume. My body aches from just that teasing promise of her.
Jun 08, 2025 09:12PM
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“What do you know about him?” Greyson runs down the winding tunnel where torches flicker to life as we pass before dying slowly behind us.
“Archery.” I grunt, touching the side of my face where blood dries. My feet skid to a stop. “Greyson, if he is anything like Artemis, his arrow wouldn’t miss. He really wasn’t trying to kill me.” Which means Pim told the truth.
Jun 07, 2025 05:36PM
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2 gods?
Hades and Apollo?
Jun 07, 2025 04:46PM
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“I don’t believe in coincidences, Angel.” He licks his lips, and I can see the desire to kiss me in his gaze. “Where did you go today, Nes? Please.”
“It means that much to you?”
“Something far bigger than your secrets is happening right now, Angel.” He leans down, resting his forehead against mine as he inhales slowly. He can breathe me in like this only when he touches me.
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average  human Which may just very well be why I’m so attracted to Vanessa. Considering that Artemis was around her from a young age, I can see the influence.
Ignoring the twins, I watch the tornado—yes, tornado—in the fucking desert just stay in one place. The funnel walls swell as though breathing. I can’t make out Vanessa in the center, but that’s where she has to be.
I refuse to believe anything else.
The pain in my chest increases, and though I can’t see him, I know Pim stands right beside me. The eerie brush of his presence is a balm to the fear building within me.
“She’s fine,” Artemis mocks Apollo, bringing their conversation to the forefront of my mind. “A tornado swallowed her whole, brother. I should skin you for that.”
“Can you not feel your dearest Vanessa in there?” Apollo sneers. One of these days, I’m going to punch that god in the face and enjoy every second. Then I’ll do it again.
“There we are.” Artemis walks forward, her bow in her hand. “Who is that?”
“Who?” I glance up, seeing the tornado die, but that isn’t what stops my heart from beating.
Vanessa falls to her knees, slumping forward. Screams rent the air. Mine? Apollo’s? I swear I hear Pim from wherever his spirit is.
My legs burn as I dart forward, my heart in my throat.
She only just now admitted to wanting me, me.
My knees skid along the hard earth as I catch her, her damn worthless guardian perched on her legs—with wings, no less.
“Vanessa?” I rest her head in my lap, pressing my fingers to the wound in her side.
Memories surge inside me.
No, not now. Not now.
I can’t keep them back any more than I can keep Vanessa from bleeding out.
Blasts rock in my ears, and I slap my hands to them, peering around as adrenaline floods my system.
Granger bleeds in my mind’s eye, wounded as I drag his body behind a shed while I talk to him about hanging on.
Liam passes out in a desert much deadlier than this.
“You poor mortal.” Artemis flicks my forehead as coolness washes through me at her touch. The memories ease, and my hands slap back to Vanessa’s wound. “That’s better.”
“Where’s the knife?” Apollo questions with that terrifying calmness his sister exhibits.
“Now, brother, does it matter right this moment?”
“She’s dying.” Confusion clouds on Apollo’s face as though it is all her fault.
“What do we do?” I focus on Artemis, who smiles at me, her head dipping low as she crouches before me.
“Why, we kill her.”
“I don’t think so.” Heart thundering in my chest, I struggle to move backwards, but I’m nothing more than a lost soldier playing in the world of gods. I will fight for this woman with my dying breath, even against a goddess.
Inside me, something awakens a long dormant rage.
“None of that now, Greyson,” she coos, reaching for me.
Cold flows through my body again, and I hold onto Vanessa, pulling her against my chest as darkness dots my vision. All at once, it vanishes.
“Why are we here, sister?” Apollo looks around at the snow, impervious to the blistering cold.
“Enter.”
“This?”
“Yes.” Artemis strides into a large obsidian stone and moves right through it.
Reaching down, Apollo lifts Vanessa, her blood still oozing from her wounds.
“Why isn’t the wound healing?” I struggle to stand, my body shaking with fear and unspent rage.
Ignoring me, Apollo walks through the stone, leaving me alone on a ledge overlooking a valley. There’s nothing but snow for as far as the eye can see.
I feel him then, stronger. Pim is urging me on.
“Not like I’m going to stay out in this cold.” My teeth chatter as I walk toward the stone. I reach out, and my fingertips fall right through, so with one sure step, I press through the stone and pop out on the other side.
I smell it first, the stench, then I hear the low whine of a dog. A path leads toward a dark archway where I can just make out the others’ shadows.
To the left sits a canine, one I’ve heard of on more than one occasion. Cerberus.
“He won’t hurt you.” I jump at Pim’s voice. He’s standing beside the three-headed dog with his hand on his belly. “He mourns her. Hurry on through.” He jerks his head at the path stretching out before me.
I know exactly where I am—the entrance to the Underworld.
But why did they bring Vanessa here?
I don’t think about it too deeply before I run toward the inky black and allow it to swallow me whole. Pins and needles rock my body, but I push through. Artemis said the next move was to kill Vanessa, and here we are at the entrance to the Underworld. One not involving a ferryman.
I move through the darkness with one purpose—to keep her from killing Vanessa. A light gleams ahead, and I stumble into a library. My momentum shoves me into a chair as a beaten, broken man pours a vial of liquid into Vanessa’s mouth.
I’m too late.


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