Crystal Babb’s Reviews > The Perfect Ruin > Status Update
Crystal Babb
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Oof, this one is... troubled. So much word repetition within consecutive sentences, cartoonish and broad characters, and a completely unlikeable MC. Was this self-published without an editor?
— Jun 19, 2025 08:59AM
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Crystal Babb
is on page 100 of 338
Look, I get holding your narrative cards to your chest if you're trying to present some kind of twist, but I'm a third of the way through this unedited mess and I still haven't been given a reason to root for the MC or met a single likeable character. The word repetition was so bad in one section last night I thought I was being trolled somehow.
— Jul 01, 2025 08:12AM
