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owen .ᐟ is 80% done
I am tearing my hair out.
Jun 27, 2025 12:35PM
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owen .ᐟ
owen .ᐟ is 60% done
Still sucks, kind of. At least something happened—but it was immediately resolved without roughly any stakes and within maybe six pages. Bruh.
Jun 27, 2025 03:09AM
Alien Clay


owen .ᐟ
owen .ᐟ is 60% done
It just feels like some Brit masplaining his worldbuilding to me. It is interesting and very well built, for sure—but can something happen for once??? The stakes feel so low. Like either they die to nature, or they die to the camp. The consequences are always so inane. Plus, the writing style feels extremely pretentious to me, but I guess that’s okay because it makes sense considering the MC.
Jun 27, 2025 01:42AM
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