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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
I liked the push and pull with the man the cult leader gave her to. I think there was a lot of potential here. If the author had chosen to make these books longer and more fleshed out these would’ve been higher rated for me.
Jun 29, 2025 10:25PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
The only other thing was author shoes to merge kids names , belew and tank. Rather than separate them which I couldn’t figure out whether it was creative or lazy writing. Also confused me with tank as they were often referred to as singular “he” so I couldn’t tell who they were talking about or if they really were two people.
Jun 29, 2025 10:31PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
Book 2 I didn’t like how mmc flipped on the FMC I almost thought he was a different person or that her ex was around making him act a certain way. I felt like the story with his ex needed more info and FMC forgave him without question wasn’t it for me. So noon 2 was my least fav. Book 3 was a decent finish. No big complaints
Jun 29, 2025 10:23PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
FMC gets a vision of the future and she has grandbabies and everyone is alive and well. The end. This was good my biggest issue was mmc had my bros name which icky. But I got past it. In boo 1 my main issue was there was no buildup for the MCs relationship they were just hooking up and in live almost immediately. I did think the villain ex was well written though.
Jun 29, 2025 10:21PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
As premonitions have told them that ex will save them. They make it to the top and find ex waiting for her. He threatens her and the mmc they fight and there is an earth quake that kills ex and his men and frees the underground. We get a view of future and MCs are all happy part of a commune and sending out rescue missions to bring more people.
Jun 29, 2025 10:18PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
Once there they realize this place is being run by a crazy cult leader and forces FMC to be given to a man that cult leader has his wife as part of his harem. Theres manipulation and drama with trying to maneuver around crazed leader and she brings up her ex as a scare tactic. We find out ex family was the worst of the cult leaders. The MCs are trying to escape to the outside world
Jun 29, 2025 10:16PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
The mmc ex wants him back and is petitioning some adultery law against him. Ultimately someone kidnaps the baby and hurts FMC and friends. They get baby back but realize FMC bad guy ex is after them so they escape to underground tunnels right before final storm in book 3
Jun 29, 2025 10:12PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
There has been another boat that popped up hiding from another storm so they go to the boat for Luke to get better and the premi baby FMC has on the island. Once on the boat mmc is cold and mean toward FMC and we find out his wife is still alive. He had left her after she fell for the cult they were supposed to pretend to join but her family was in it and she became brainwashed.
Jun 29, 2025 10:10PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
There’s a lot of back and forth with the ex and mmc. She is forced to stay with ex but never gives in to his advances. She also makes friends with another woman with two kids, the cook Lori and her hookup Luke. They all escape to an island in book 2, FMC is prego by with mmc baby, they make more friends but Lori bf gets sick
Jun 29, 2025 10:08PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
On the way she finds man on the side of the road the boys insist they save. Come to find out all 3 of them have the gift of sight and is why the ex wants her (doesn’t know about the boys) she lies to get on the boat and pretends man is husband. This pisses off psycho ex who secretly is growing drugs to control the ship from under his captain.
Jun 29, 2025 10:03PM
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Laroc
Laroc is 99% done
So I finished this series. It kept me in it and it was very interesting with a lot of loving parts. Premise it’s the end of the world FMC is guardian of her sisters twins after she is killed by crazy husband trying to force them to complete some swim for a crazed cult. There have been storms and hurricane that have killed millions and FMC is now escaping to a boat with directions from ex.
Jun 29, 2025 10:01PM
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