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He’s in an alley with a group of light wizards, including the minister of magic, and they’re not working together to make shield charms? Everyone knows light magic is cooperative, plus it’d be great optics if, in the very meeting where Harry agreed to be monitored by Light wizards, the Light wizards aided Harry to defeat a Dark creature.
— Jul 12, 2025 06:21PM
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One weird thing about this book has been some descriptions of Harry’s appearance: Draco’s POV has a line about Harry’s curls, and Snape recently mentioned something about copper undertones in Harry’s hair. Are we supposed to picture Connor as canon Harry and TSA Harry as sometime else? I’ve been picturing Harry regular Harry and Connor as an OC with reddish brown hair.
— Jul 29, 2025 08:41PM
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How am I supposed to clock back in and proofread advertisements when Snape is taking over Hogwarts :/
— Jul 29, 2025 10:51AM
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It was bad enough when teachers would kneel to get on Harry’s level when he was eleven, but that they’re doing it when he’s sixteen is entirely ridiculous. He’s probably taller than most women in his life at this point.
— Jul 27, 2025 05:27PM
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That fight with Falco was a little anticlimactic, unfortunately, and I felt the same way about Harry’s battle with the stone earlier.
— Jul 26, 2025 03:31PM
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@Tea, hey, good memory! Snape is punishing Harry by making him read fairy tales and other kidlit.
— Jul 25, 2025 04:28PM
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Was this thestral situation transplanted from WTStSaS? None of it aligns with all the character growth Harry has had this book.
(Also, I can't believe he had to cut the fuck out of his arm and lose a dangerous amount of blood to free the thestral, unless every link of the chain had to be entirely coated in it. Prick a finger, run it around the circumference of the hoof, repeat thrice, the end.)
— Jul 25, 2025 01:52PM
(Also, I can't believe he had to cut the fuck out of his arm and lose a dangerous amount of blood to free the thestral, unless every link of the chain had to be entirely coated in it. Prick a finger, run it around the circumference of the hoof, repeat thrice, the end.)
Dan
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Decorating a room you’re going to stay in for two nights max is such a bizarre thing to do.
— Jul 24, 2025 07:35PM
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I guess I don’t understand, if Harry wanted some time by himself to brood so badly, he didn’t just go to the hospital wing for magical exhaustion after saving the school. Pomfrey would have kept everyone out if he’d asked, and he wouldn’t have had people staring at him in class all day.
— Jul 24, 2025 02:35PM
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Jul 12, 2025 07:43PM
If I remember right, Light Wizards in this series are basically all terminally stupid
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Tea wrote: "If I remember right, Light Wizards in this series are basically all terminally stupid"I’ve noticed the same thing. It’s a real shame, too, because that really cuts down on the complexity of the narrative. Actually, it’s the same as how she spent a few books writing Ravenclaw as the evil house: rather than addressing the flaws in canon (Slytherin is evil, Dark wizards are generally incompetent bad guys, etc.), she’s just transferring JKR’s prejudices to a different group.
