richie’s Reviews > The Summer of Firsts and Lasts > Status Update

2 and a half stars because what was that ENDING.

it’s been progressively slow, the sisters all have crushes and seem to think they’re the center of their universe. cant blame them tho, i remember feeling like that at camp. calla likes her best friend duncan, violet likes james and daisy like(d/s) a guy named joel, but that isn’t working out so well.

okay, it’s flowing a bit more now, but the pov’s are a little to childish for me. i know all three of them are underage and at that age everything is about boys but, somehow this revolves completely and utterly around them and it’s kind of exhausting. i like daisy the best so far.

so far, this reads like a 6th grade writing project that i would have written, which is to say, fan service and boy crazy + summer camp and sisters? it’s got 12 year old me written all over it.