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It occurs to me that no one in this series has ever been shown reading a fiction book. It’s impacting the believability of the world, unfortunately—even at college people don’t exclusively read nonfiction.
— Jul 19, 2025 01:57PM
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One weird thing about this book has been some descriptions of Harry’s appearance: Draco’s POV has a line about Harry’s curls, and Snape recently mentioned something about copper undertones in Harry’s hair. Are we supposed to picture Connor as canon Harry and TSA Harry as sometime else? I’ve been picturing Harry regular Harry and Connor as an OC with reddish brown hair.
— Jul 29, 2025 08:41PM
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How am I supposed to clock back in and proofread advertisements when Snape is taking over Hogwarts :/
— Jul 29, 2025 10:51AM
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It was bad enough when teachers would kneel to get on Harry’s level when he was eleven, but that they’re doing it when he’s sixteen is entirely ridiculous. He’s probably taller than most women in his life at this point.
— Jul 27, 2025 05:27PM
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That fight with Falco was a little anticlimactic, unfortunately, and I felt the same way about Harry’s battle with the stone earlier.
— Jul 26, 2025 03:31PM
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@Tea, hey, good memory! Snape is punishing Harry by making him read fairy tales and other kidlit.
— Jul 25, 2025 04:28PM
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Was this thestral situation transplanted from WTStSaS? None of it aligns with all the character growth Harry has had this book.
(Also, I can't believe he had to cut the fuck out of his arm and lose a dangerous amount of blood to free the thestral, unless every link of the chain had to be entirely coated in it. Prick a finger, run it around the circumference of the hoof, repeat thrice, the end.)
— Jul 25, 2025 01:52PM
(Also, I can't believe he had to cut the fuck out of his arm and lose a dangerous amount of blood to free the thestral, unless every link of the chain had to be entirely coated in it. Prick a finger, run it around the circumference of the hoof, repeat thrice, the end.)
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Decorating a room you’re going to stay in for two nights max is such a bizarre thing to do.
— Jul 24, 2025 07:35PM
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I guess I don’t understand, if Harry wanted some time by himself to brood so badly, he didn’t just go to the hospital wing for magical exhaustion after saving the school. Pomfrey would have kept everyone out if he’d asked, and he wouldn’t have had people staring at him in class all day.
— Jul 24, 2025 02:35PM
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Jul 19, 2025 03:00PM
Harry gets forced to read fairy tales as punishment a couple of times, and I feel like Connor reads fiction early on in the first book or two. It is all a bit skewed by Harry, though. The boy wouldn't know how to relax with a book if his life depended on it.
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Tea wrote: "Harry gets forced to read fairy tales as punishment a couple of times, and I feel like Connor reads fiction early on in the first book or two. It is all a bit skewed by Harry, though. The boy would..."I do remember the fairy tales, and now that you mention it, there may be something about Connor reading a kids' book, perhaps before they go to Hogwarts. I suppose I was thinking Wizarding Agatha Christie or whatever, regular old popular fiction. Not that we see that in canon, but in this series where people are constantly reading, it'd add some realism to switch genres up, IMO.
