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Corey is 7% done

First thing I'm noticing is that Trisha seems to be like genuinely terrible at characterisation

You cannot establish that your protagonist doesn't really care about sex in one part and then have her say a grumpy woman needs to get laid in another part

— Aug 06, 2025 02:18PM

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Corey is 94% done

How did the pacing get WORSE

— Nov 15, 2025 07:24PM

Corey is 79% done

Alright the murder subplot appears to have been forgotten entirely

— Nov 15, 2025 04:15PM

Corey is 75% done

Weird racism about middle eastern men

— Nov 15, 2025 12:29PM

Corey is 74% done

Sorry she's been essential kidnapped and coerced into being this guy's sex toy and her concern is that he's a cannibal who wants to fatten her up to sell to other cannibals??? Something is wrong with Trisha Paytas's brain

— Nov 15, 2025 12:29PM

Corey is 70% done

Aside from the fact that this is definitely more horror than the erotica it's marketed as: the pacing is atrocious

— Nov 15, 2025 12:25PM

Corey is 64% done

I don't know what word I think we should use but neither "secretions" nor "juices" are words I want to see in sex scenes unless they're really good scenes

— Nov 15, 2025 12:17PM

Corey is 59% done

And now our protagonist has become a rapist

— Nov 05, 2025 12:48PM

Corey is 51% done

Our protagonist saying her parents are crazy but she's not when she's demonstrably worse than her parents is hilarious

— Nov 05, 2025 10:10AM

Corey is 47% done

Not what bipolar is but okay

— Nov 05, 2025 09:51AM

Corey is 44% done

"I never wanted those pills to begin with"

Wh

What pills