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Shauna
is on page 167
It’s not bad but the world building is confusing. I can’t get a sense of what kind of world it is. At times it seems like typical medieval fantasy world, but then it’s traveling by horses and carriages and wagons, yet things like working plumbing/showers exist. There are cloaks and leather pants and fantasy garb, but also military boots and running shoes. It’s off-putting!
— Aug 07, 2025 02:49AM
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Shauna
is on page 341
Struggling to get through it. The editing really could be better. But action has finally picked up. Close to the end, though!
…then I’ve only got three more books to get through. 😅
— Nov 01, 2025 04:16PM
…then I’ve only got three more books to get through. 😅
Shauna
is on page 52
It’s a good story so far. The author is a good writer. However, I’m only 7 chapters in and I’ve seen numerous typos. And in one chapter, the youngest brother is seven, and one or two chapters later, it says he’s eight. Book could stand some better editing, TBH.
— Jul 02, 2025 03:11AM
