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Skimming..... skimming....

Back to the effing vampires and the leather sex-inducing kilts. *sigh* Where's Austin?

Shopping. I hate shopping. I hate reading about shopping. Don't care about the characters clothes. Don't care about fetish shops. Unless you're going to have nice public screaming match or something, spare me the shopping. No! Shopping!

For the love of god, can someone edit this book?!?

So far Macy is like a physically mature 7 year old with ADHD and poor impulse control. (I should know, I live with one that is only lacking in the physical maturity department. Plus no fangs and/or immortality) This makes it really hard for me not to cast York in the mommy role. I am really hoping for some character development here, because this is all fucked up in my head now.