Ppcfransen’s Reviews > The Mango Murders > Status Update

“Should I send it to Nathan?” “That could save us another scolding,” I said,

Please don’t share information you obtained illegally/through subterfuge with the police. They can’t use it in evidence. Better tell them who might have interesting information and let them ask for it/get a warrant.

Eating at restaurants in fiction always puzzles me. Hayley orders her lunch; she and her company exchange about 30 seconds of niceties; lunch is delivered.
Is this a fast food type of place where lunch orders are already plated up and only need to be picked up from the counter to be delivered to the customer, or was there a long pause in the conversation that wasn’t mentioned?

Nathan was going to literally kill me.

I don’t know what is more worrying: the domestic abuse or the abuse of the word ‘literally’.

I can say it was likely a woman, based on height and approximate weight.

Actually, you can tell it was for certain a woman based on built of the skeleton. Or because you already do a simple blood or dna test.

Googling her boss, Hayley finds a seven year old news story she knew nothing about. Seriously, she never googled her boss before? And she pretends to be some kind of jounalist.

“You wouldn’t be asking all these questions if someone hadn’t been killed.

What? An explosion itself doesn’t warrant a police investigation? There has to be a casualty?

“Let’s be reasonable. You’re in no shape to be useful,”

She greated all the passengers and knows the crew, if anything, she’s useful as a source of how many people need to be pulled out of the water.