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NWil is 20% done

Returning to this with underlying questions: 1) What is Caton’s motive to cheat or submit to Amelia 2) While Amelia’s cheating motives are clearer, why is she engaging in this way with Caton?

The best I can deduce is they hated each other to the point of fucking? Doesn’t really add up though. We continue.

— Sep 04, 2025 10:23AM

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NWil is 48% done

So this mother daughter conversation is interesting. I don’t know how to feel about it.

— Sep 26, 2025 05:12AM

NWil is 46% done

Lol. I know why I’m slow walking this. It’s too melodramatic. It’s exhausting.

— Sep 26, 2025 04:50AM

NWil is 42% done

Back to this.

— Sep 26, 2025 03:31AM

NWil is 42% done

— Sep 06, 2025 08:04PM

NWil is 41% done

— Sep 06, 2025 01:27PM

NWil is 30% done

MCs motives still shrouded in secrecy. But we know Caton feels helpless against Amelia’s wiles and I think Amelia is instigating a D/s relationship between them.

— Sep 04, 2025 12:07PM

NWil is 20% done

This book feels like a slug. I don’t want to DNF but I’m not connecting with anybody on the page.

— Sep 03, 2025 12:42AM

NWil is 19% done

I’m confounded by these characters and I can’t understand their motives. Even Jack’s subplot is random.

— Sep 02, 2025 05:27PM

NWil is 7% done

Early portions are dragging a bit. I’m struggling to hold interest.

— Sep 02, 2025 03:02PM

NWil is starting

Attempting this again.