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is 5% done
I don’t know where this book is going. The narrator’s accents are distracting. The first half of the first chapter was weird and the second half was cringe. Alice’s age is unclear but Fiona is written like a new adult not a 35 year old. Maybe as we dive deeper, her personality becomes fuller. I’m struggling but still willing to trudge along because in a fan of TJ O’Shea.
— Sep 20, 2025 02:24PM

