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Laroc
is 34% done
And I know it’s just me but I like my mmc to catch on to this which he didn’t. Mmc was very mean to her which I didn’t like and then once I learned the age gap and FMC being 19 mmc 28 they lost me. There’s some big secret about her life before her accident at 9, her nightmares and secret crest which sorta had me but the MCs were not keeping me in it.
— Sep 24, 2025 10:03PM
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Laroc
is 34% done
I was trying with this but the cover art was throwing me also the reference to mmc being a pirate and part of some Nordic secret society but also the mafia just all over the place plus the writing was rather jaunting with all the graphic language and even FMC being a virgin just didn’t buy it. Her first bj seemed pretty advanced
— Sep 24, 2025 10:00PM
