CB12’s Reviews > Magic Triumphs [Dramatized Adaptation] > Status Update

WE DID IT JOOOEEEEEEEEE!!!

“Retirement father” ok that’s funny asf

So Simon dies and it’s mention in passing ok ok cool

Not a proposal from Christopher and Barabus 5 mins before the battle — just make a novella and keep it moving! Why do we need to jam everything into this book!!

Finally. Interesting themes here about humanity and the natural end of conquest. It’s a shame we couldn’t have more of this

The pacing and the story beats are just not what I was expecting for the final book in this series. There’s this fan service fanfiction vibe that’s impacting pacing,. There’s a whole scene 80% in describing what they’re eating for breakfast. And don’t even get me started on how IA force in sex scenes that are obviously for reader service. It all makes the big bad seem not as scary or urgent.

We probably needed a Hugh redemption arch but it’s uneven when they barely mention him for the first 70+ % and then the whole narrative is should we forgive him…oh btw this would make more sense if you read his novella

Ahh so Curran is having these changes because he ate Roland’s god tiger thing got it now

Ahh so Curran is having these changes because he ate Roland’s god tiger thing got it now

The tone is too light and feels like the stakes aren’t high enough for the last book