Lee’s Reviews > Solstice: Lake Prophet Mysteries, Book 1 > Status Update
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Tiber and mr cop's attraction to each other feels.. fake. Forced. Their inner thoughts keep saying they're attracted to each other, but that's kinda it. They don't actually feel/act like they're attracted to each other. On Tiber's end especially, it feels more like he thinks mr cop is a puppy kicking tool. So it doesn't feel genuine when he then turns around like "oh nooo, it's for duke, definitely not the hot cop!!"
— Oct 02, 2025 07:39AM
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Lee
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They jump very quickly from tiber saying "I don't date" to making out and handjobs... if it were JUST a kiss, and they decided to go slowly, fine. But they jump all the way to sex. This should have been a slooow relationship :\ this happens every fucking time a character says they're not ready for dating/sex/etc...
— Oct 02, 2025 05:35PM
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Tiber somehow knows Duke's name BEFORE looking at the tag--or even approaching Duke? Is that an error or did he somehow mindread the dog before the dog would even look at him?
— Oct 01, 2025 05:58PM
Lee
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Tiber is all offended that Gabriel doesn't know the dog's name, but how could he?? It's not his dog. It's the dog of a new-to-town guy he's never met. Who is dead. So yeah. They can't exactly ask the owner, and the whole reason Tiber is there is because nobody can get close to the dog, so they haven't had the opportunity to check its tags or anything either.. unreasonable on Tiber's part.
— Oct 01, 2025 05:42PM
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Oct 02, 2025 09:02AM
Er.. not genuine by which I mean, we're supposed to read that as it actually IS about mr cop, and the tiber doth protest too much. Also them being hot town gossip because they spoke outside the store for 30 seconds? Really felt like a forced scenario to have mr cop protest as well "oh nooo, there's no thing with tiber!!" Except like. There really isn't anything with tiber. I'd have waited til later to make any mention of attraction between them, because it feels like it's being pushed too hard when there's zero chemistry between them atm.
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