E🍓’s Reviews > A Song to Wake a Thousand Sorrows > Status Update

This is one of those books that really just needs a good editor

„This was your idea, little songbird. You told me to marry a commoner.“

That she did

„A masterful touch really, hiding a life behind so much other life.“

So does the king know about Numairs magic?

„She was the first to bear me in this world and she bore only a fraction of the power I hold in you“

So the Songs power is kind of like All For One

„Renault County is going to burn for one-thousand and twenty-seven years“

That’s kind of a random number

So considering how Renault County borders the sea, why can’t it be reached from there? It wouldn’t really make sense for the water to be reaped too since it is constantly moving?

„There were few people in this world who could sneak up on her. Numair was one. Unfortunately, Alaric was another.“

But can’t she feel his magic? Isn’t it a whole thing that Alarics magic feels slimy and gross?

„So fall in love, Your Majesty. With a commoner, perhaps.“

Why would she give him that idea? He would obviously choose her?

Why has no one in the village noticed her earring by now? She is literally wearing her hair up

„What is mine is mine. Anything you succeed in taking from me will only ever be stolen.“

ATE‼️