Priscilla’s Reviews > Sharing Shadow Secrets > Status Update

I'm in too deep and am obligated to finish since I bought this. This had to be written by a lovesick teenager who dreams more about threesomes than actually having them. I can't.

This is so cringe, but I'm more than halfway through and I have got to rally. The dialogue between the MCs is trying too hard to be flirtatious and banter-like; it falls so flat and cliché. Le sigh.

Idk why I'm still reading this...

This is getting a little cringe. The dialogue between the two MCs are not cute flirty, but trying too hard banter =_=.