Not HG’s Reviews > Broken > Status Update

now that's interesting. apparently our mc isn't actually in instalove with the dude, but in a lust-like addiction to his magical mojo.
here's hoping the author doesn't mess it up

I'm still reeling from how the main character and her obvious love interest went from saying less than 3 sentences to be madly in love and knowing everything about each other in HALF A FREAKING PAGE. I'm not even paying attention anymore, it was just that mindboggling.

I'm sorry, did I skip all the chapters where the main character and Alec hang out, get to know each other, find they have things in common, and fall in love?
I mean Jesus, at least Twilight had them chat once in a while. These guys literally have their first conversation AFTER they're madly in love with each other.
I think this is it, the Holy Grail of bad writing I've been searching for all this time.

We're reaching Twilight levels of plot nonexistence. Also, calm down guy, I can take only so many cliches at once before I fling my phone out the window

so we've graduated from "passing out from overwhelming painful memories " to "passing out when the romantic interest stares at me". Neat

I love how we're supposed to side with Adriana against the "jerk" Alec when she's the one hurling insults at him left and right unprovoked. I'm enjoying this book so much.