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Not HG
is 71% done
I'm sorry, did I skip all the chapters where the main character and Alec hang out, get to know each other, find they have things in common, and fall in love?
I mean Jesus, at least Twilight had them chat once in a while. These guys literally have their first conversation AFTER they're madly in love with each other.
I think this is it, the Holy Grail of bad writing I've been searching for all this time.
— Dec 14, 2016 10:00PM
I mean Jesus, at least Twilight had them chat once in a while. These guys literally have their first conversation AFTER they're madly in love with each other.
I think this is it, the Holy Grail of bad writing I've been searching for all this time.
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Not HG
is on page 84 of 352
now that's interesting. apparently our mc isn't actually in instalove with the dude, but in a lust-like addiction to his magical mojo.
here's hoping the author doesn't mess it up
— Dec 19, 2016 08:31AM
here's hoping the author doesn't mess it up
Not HG
is 81% done
I'm still reeling from how the main character and her obvious love interest went from saying less than 3 sentences to be madly in love and knowing everything about each other in HALF A FREAKING PAGE. I'm not even paying attention anymore, it was just that mindboggling.
— Dec 18, 2016 08:47PM
Not HG
is 51% done
We're reaching Twilight levels of plot nonexistence. Also, calm down guy, I can take only so many cliches at once before I fling my phone out the window
— Dec 13, 2016 07:34AM
Not HG
is 22% done
so we've graduated from "passing out from overwhelming painful memories " to "passing out when the romantic interest stares at me". Neat
— Dec 10, 2016 10:10AM
Not HG
is 22% done
I love how we're supposed to side with Adriana against the "jerk" Alec when she's the one hurling insults at him left and right unprovoked. I'm enjoying this book so much.
— Dec 10, 2016 08:56AM
