g’s Reviews > One Night in Hartswood > Status Update
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is 34% done
plot that doesn’t actually make sense to force these two clowns to stay huddled together in the woods rather than separate in an inn? sign me up
— Oct 24, 2025 08:43PM
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is 56% done
the story could literally be solved and a happy ending right now. raff was forced to confess and right there was penn’s chance to do the same. and now what? another 154 pages of the same goddamn circus
— Oct 24, 2025 10:04PM
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bro named himself “penn” as a shorthand for peregrine?????? PENN?????
— Oct 24, 2025 07:06PM
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horrible fucking sign of things to come that the pov swaps back and forth mid chapter with no character table header or even a decorative line break
— Oct 24, 2025 06:15PM
