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Josh
is 20% done
Very interesting so far.I really love time travel books.So this one is up my alley. But there's a major drawback at first.I thought I just couldn't concentrate.So I thought it was on me, but I think i've pinpointed it down to author skill. He's got this sort of transient narrative approach which assumes the reader knows everything the author does about history.And ancient rome. It doesn't help the storytelling aspect
— Nov 01, 2025 05:18PM
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Josh
is 73% done
Okay it gets better. The scene writing could definitely use a lot of tightening up, but if you have a lot of concentration, you can get to it.
Also, there is a nice little twist here.At the ending, knit is pretty good.
— Nov 04, 2025 11:14AM
Also, there is a nice little twist here.At the ending, knit is pretty good.
Josh
is 30% done
I don't know, ma'am.The author can clearly write a plot, but he cannot write a scene... and this is important because things don't move along very interestingly.
— Nov 02, 2025 03:10PM
