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Summerfire
Summerfire is 44% done
I'm sorry, are you trying to tell me, right now, unto my face, that the Titanic crashed because ONE dude left his binoculars locked up? They had no other binoculars on board? Is that what you're trying to tell me? That the binoculars were locked up and the key to your own PERSONAL set came with the job? What the actual fuck.
Nov 08, 2025 10:56AM
Water Moon

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Summerfire
Summerfire is 52% done
This woman has a film-only understanding of how childbirth works. LABOR DOES NOT INSTANTLY LEAD TO BIRTH MA'AM
Nov 09, 2025 02:29PM
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Summerfire
Summerfire is 39% done
So time doesn't matter to the Shiikuin but Hana and Kei can "give themselves time" by confusing them? I know this is a fairly common plot device but it doesn't really work if you make the foe seem omniscient and omnipotent.
Nov 08, 2025 07:37AM
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Summerfire
Summerfire is 34% done
The pacing on this is off. It's not great.
Nov 04, 2025 05:56PM
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Summerfire
Summerfire is 17% done
Mostly this is not bad, but the writing is a little clunky. Also, it's very dumb that she has Keishin, who has been presumably speaking Japanese this whole time, ask if he pronounced the word "Hana" correctly. Bitch, what?
Nov 02, 2025 08:49AM
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Jo Books 😂 gotta love the rants over historically inaccurate idiocy


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