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OFFICALLY decided what’s wrong with talon is, among other things, he has a man bun

Why would Talon “shriek” at her during a disagreement. I hate hate hate when authors don’t seem to think through how adjectives specifically when it comes to describing speech actually play out. Like do they not read these scenes over again and realize how insane they are something.

Also why is Celeste so fricking rude?

Okay yeah so like I’m interested in the plot, but there’s just so many extra words and sentences it makes the reading SO SLOW and it’s hard for me to get through

Ok so far it’s interesting but my biggest complaint is it’s sooooo wordy.